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OPR Writing Jam #9
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Changing Winds: A Jackals Story
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TheTestBear
190 days ago
(+3)
Excellent example of "show, don't tell." Loved it.
leapingbison
190 days ago
(+2)
Thank you! The word limit was a real challenge!
