Okay, definitely one of my favorites so far. In a hilarious turn of events, I ended up getting the good ending. I don't know how. I don't know why. But it was glorious and you both did a fantastic job. The ending was all worth it!
I did have one bug and it could have been on my end. I went to go to the hallway after the second to last step and it teleported me from the store front to the storeroom. Certainly not game-breaking but it did confuse me until I realized where I was. That was the ONLY bad thing I ran into. :D