My first selection to review and I was immediately hooked in. Overall, I loved how this flowed, the story, and the choices that felt like there were distinct options (I did not replay to find out how the other options went, but I trust my selections were unique).
The most significant mark is about accessibility. I tried navigating without the mouse throughout the game and that worked fine, but the one area where I would expect keyboard control is most necessary - Preferences - I couldn't get the focus to the options in that screen.
Aside from that, the music in the rap section was a little "off" compared to the rest of the story - though with more of a transition, I could see it working (even some silence for a moment might help).
I love the video style.
Nice work! I look forward to seeing more of your work!