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Cool update so far! just wanted to drop by and throw some stuff I found,

So Molly says that the player can explore if they feel like it, but idk if its a bug or not but nothing happens? you don't get a option to explore by yourself


Simple spelling mistake with 'ark' turning into 'arh'


the first paragraph address the client as "he/his" then in the second just completely changes to "she/her"

then a little side thing I noticed, is a lot of the lewd text will address things like "him hand" but maybe its just me

Little suggestion is adding gender of the PC to the "Personal" section of the menu


hope this helps!

Thanks for dropping by and checking the game out. I appreciate you taking the time to show me some bugs.

Molly Exploration: You can't explore alone so it's not a bug. You can only explore with Molly. It's her gameplay element. Her saying you can explore if you feel like it is more just keeping the dialogue real feeling as most people in that setting would say it with a shaky confidence as they don't want to seem like bossing you around. "You can do this, if you want, I'm not saying you have to. Just if you're interested". If others say it's confusing too, I'll rewrite it a little.

"Ark": Thanks for pointing the spelling mistake. I actually meant to spell "arch" haha just forgot the "c".

Pronouns are going to drive me insane this game I think haha I found the series of lines that need to be rewritten and will have that fixed. Just the "fun" that comes with having every pronoun as a variable. Throws off the sentence structure when trying to write lines in your head.

I gotcha, Yeah I found it a little confusing but I get it now.
I'll drop by and let you know of any other bugs or spelling mistakes I find,

I appreciate it. Thank you