The most ominous thing about this VN is the "update coming soon... probably" at the very end.
Is an update coming soon or not?? I want to know what happens next!!!
This is a pretty good intro! The characters have a lot of personality (Kira is so grumpy hehe), the writing is lively and evocative, and it managed to set up a lot of interesting mysteries very early on.
The use of sound effects is also really good! There's quite a few SFX and they work really well in creating an atmosphere and in telling a story. The blackscreen + all of the driving SFX near the beginning was really nice; a good example of using the VN as a medium to inform the reader what's happening without using any words.
The sound direction in this is p good...
It'd be nice if it had a custom UI, and sometimes the effects on the text were so Intense it was a bit hard to read what was being said, but I enjoyed this overall! Am excited for the rest!
Also, I probably shouldn't've found Kira's dad charismatic, but I did lol
Contrary to what Kira might think, I kinda like him hahaha