Thank you! Well,I admit that English is not my language and I'm really sorry, I did my best I can do.
I did check my game before release it, but sometime I can't fix the error or miss them.
So here, you can contact me to tell the error, I'd be appreciate it. And about ch1 that I'll release it soon, I asked one of my friend to help me, so I hope this time would be better than before. Thank you again <3
Hey Dev, if you like i can help you with the proofreading. As for the errors: 'Always look young even when they get old' or 'when they aged' -> intro to the Immortals
'believe' -> first scene with Lin Mei
'What do you think, Mister?' -> first scene with Lin Mei
'How rude of me' -> first scene with Lin Mei
etc.