I think this is an excellent idea that could be great for people new to RPGs—everyone loves action and loot, but highly encouraging people to describe how they engage in that action while also asking them to consider their motivations seems like it would be a great learning tool. I'll have to save this in my back pocket.
Note: For the cover, I think the non-bolded yellow text is rather hard to read at the top. Perhaps a darker mustard yellow that's thicker would be better legible?