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Hey buddy, thanks for your feedback on the game i'd participated with my friends. 
Good points:
- good story and a beautiful idea make this like a book.
- simple is good, your artwork are rly nice, congrats!
- no bugs, very clean <3

Bad Points:
- I have the sensation that IA's are all the same thing and thats bad.
- winter father is the unique person dat gives me a sensation "let me understand this pattern"
- Book idea is good, but at the same time not if your story aways force you to the same thing (press shooot to start) [i also liked the start cus the elf comes from nowere and i'd ran and started shooting, i was surprised and thats cool].
- need to adjust SFX and music volume

Overall your game is good, just need a more complex IA for enemies. (Think about enter the gungeon)

Thanks for the awesome comment!!

Yes, i've only learned two ai behaviors.  Chase and patrol hehe.  I will definitely study more! (know of any good ai lessons/scripts?)

Yeah music and sound are my weakest points. Was the volume low or loud?  I think i set them pretty low.

Thanks again for the awesome feedback!


SFX was Loud and music Low.
i cant help you with programming cus i just work with audio design (sfx and composition), so sorry. 
Well, u've made a rly great job alone, well done!