Thank you! And I agree. I do feel like my sex scenes are lacking so far. But when I think of how I could improve it, I can't think beyond what's already written. It's definitely something I'm trying to improve here and there as I work on Chapter 3. If you don't mind me asking, in your opinion (and anyone else), what would make it less "dull"? Is it just the length and neeing more details? Maybe another perspective will help me. (Sorry if that's weird to ask)
Although a bit experienced with writing both nsfw and sfw stuff, I can't give a lot of advice, as styles may vary greatly. Still, I would give a more in-depth description of everything that can be described; some more "steamy" descriptions regarding the interaction between the bodies of the individuals involved in the "act", like, how they feel internally and externally (perhaps changing as per previous choices/interactions?), how the enviroment they're in affects their act and all that. I'd also recommend take a look on other works, take them as examples and improve your style's description/length.