Nice concept and artstyle, I felt the story was really going somewhere, however the game is still a little rough around the edges, particularly the text cutting at the end of the textbox takes away any tension build by the nice narration, as well as the a little hard to read font.
The labyrinth section looked really interesting with a lot of mechanics to play with but I feel the enemy is just too fast and obnoxious and you end up relying on RNG to win, and the controls make it a little bit frustrating.
In the end the game refused to load the second part of the labyrinth and I could not finish the game, sorry about that.
I am sure with a little more effort here and there this game can be an incredible medium for the story you are trying to tell.