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With gifs and everything!

This looks fun and whimsical, and you've laid out the game loops and everything nice and clearly. I love the Goose Game as a comp. It strikes me as a small sort of game, but mobile games often are.

The one issue I had is that I don't see anything about failure--it doesn't seem possible to lose the game or make a mistake with consequences, so as described, it seems like it would be trivially easy. (I'm sure there are consequences, I just don't see them in this GDD.) But that's really it.