Mr.Owens is high-key creepy and ya'll need to fix that.
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Ok, I didn't know that it was a one-man project and I'm sorry about that. Also, just saying, your grammar could be a little bit more accurate. And how is Mr. Owens NOT creepy? First of all, he tries to hang out with a student, which is illegal, and second, He drives a student home, where he lives, and third, just giving off totally creepy vibes.
I agree his white beard was ugly, because he seemed too old, now with black beard at least he seems more young but still forty's, which is great. Just like a teacher's age.
But I strongly desagree about him being creepy. You probably would think he's if he's not your type. Because if a person don't like older men, they probably would think he's a pervert or something because if a old men hitting younger persons they would think his intentions would be only to harass them. But all his actions towards the mc is too innocent (inviting for a lunch? Saying "good day"? "How's your day"? "Let's hang out again?" Oh god what a creepy) and we don't know him yet. His background, his life, if he's alone, got divorced or lost his son... Also this game is about depression. Would we think the only one in depression is just the mc? Would Owen's is not looking for him because he remembers someone to him? Well I can't say as much because I'm not writing this game and also the game just started. Most of the characters doesn't even have a background or said something about their lifes, except Seth. It's too soon to assumpt things.
I just hope this game continues to update and doesn't turns into an abandoned project like almost all furry games. I really want to know how this game finishes; specially Owen's rote. I really like him ♡
Yeah I agree with you, although back in the day I had a error that forced you to start on Owen's route. I understand that some people might not be into his route, it is only for people with certain taste. And I guess most people don't really have friend relationships with their teacher so when they see those kinds of relationships they think its creepy. (Also them figuring out that its a visual novel and putting 1 and 1 together. But in all reality you can't blame him for not liking a route that he was forced to be put on. (And btw I like how you analized Owen's actions, your on to something x3)
And on a side note all the characters was built around certain problems, involving depression and such so yeah MC
I don't know what are you talking about #'-'#
Hehehe Actually I had screenwriting classes so yeah analyzing character's behaviors was one of the subjects in the course #^^'#
I also had great relationship with my teachers, specially my vocational program's teachers because they helped a lot to study through the course. If you're good to them, they will treat you with respect, will act more patiently towards you, even explain your doubts more attentively than others. They're people after all.
Owen's kinda remember me of them, maybe that's one of the motives I like him ♡
Also just to add to end the doubt: there's no law that prohibits a teacher to date students, they being over 18 and consented, however what weights more about this kind of relationship is the "favoritism" type, that a student or teacher can use this relationship in order to gain a higher grade or to bargain to gain more praise towards the student if the student is directly under the teacher's wing. That would break the institute's grading system and harm other students merits and also spoil the institute's image. Because of that, that kind of relationship is not well seen. Also it's more like an institute policy than a state one.
Although Owen's KINDA did that kind of thing with mc but he didn't do it on purpose to gain something from him. He noticed that mc's grades dropped and asked what happened, concerned about him, and at the end he just raised a little as a token of trust, like mostly of the teachers do to their student that obviously are having a bad time.
Like I said, Owen's is such a caring old bear ♡
Mhmmm, Im aiming to make him as a old dad type of bear but not be so much so that he is just a rip off of Coach Grifter from EA by Dyne because they would essentially be the same and i'm trying not to do that. And about the error thing, around 3.0 or something I had a point system error where it made almost everyone go into Owen's route for some reason. If "I don't know what are you talking about #'-'#" Is referring to idk. And I often see good teachers not "giving" free points for kids grades but making little easy assignments to help boost they're grade (on a side note about the grade stuff)
Ops. My bad. I got confused about "onto something". I understood "being on to something", like being suspicious about my analyses on Owen's behavior, like I'm getting closer or something '-'
English is my second language so I misunderstood some slangs sometimes ^^'
Also I liked Coach Grifter rote as well. My favorite ones are him and Dozer. And I agree about on making something different.