Well then I guess the only thing wrong with the book is it has an ending to it . . .
In all seriousness great job on the writing. The hinterlands addition was great, it was slow at the beginning, but I think having it purposefully slow made the payoff that much more sweet at the end for me, and I love how crazy the story got near the ending of the 2nd third. The plot twists were insane.
All the characters are very well written and I am impressed at how you guys managed to get me invested into the story so easily.
I also like the poems and aesthetics added.
Keep up the great work.