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yes, i caught up on that. writing is deliberate, the use of a more specific term like thermodynamics is indictative that the accuracy of the phrasing is important, even if physics would do just fine. my intention here was to tell the op that they are not wrong, but they are not right. no one likes being corrected, so i figured to deliberately write a response that doesn't dismiss what they thought as improper.

Well then I guess the only thing wrong with the book is it has an ending to it . . . 

In all seriousness great job on the writing.  The hinterlands addition was great, it was slow at the beginning, but I think having it purposefully slow made the payoff that much more sweet at the end for me, and I love how crazy the story got near the ending of the 2nd third.  The plot twists were insane.

All the characters are very well written and I am impressed at how you guys managed to get me invested into the story so easily.

I also like the poems and aesthetics added.

Keep up the great work.