It was a cool read! The little bits and pieces of mystery got me intrigued about the world and I'll be sure to check out the whole thing when it comes out. ^^
I think I liked Vanessa's story the most, with the mysterious illness and clues hinting at some dark (?) family secret? (I'm also very curious about the father wearing that clip lol)
And the character art is really cute 💕
AHHH I'm happy to hear this was a cool read! I know it's still a very small peek into the actual story but it makes me delighted to know that you're intrigued and are looking forward to more \^0^/ I'm glad you enjoy the character art too, especially because it gives me confidence in my art skills to hear this :Dc
Oh!! Vanessa!! She's definitely got a neat mystery going on with her family and she probably has the storyline I'm most excited for!! Her mom's mysterious ailment and the thing about her family is something I can't wait to get to in the actual story! Especially because the answers to those questions will also act as set-up for something else...>:3c (and gfhjgfhj one day maybe ill have to draw him wearing that hairclip haha)
Thank you again so much for the comment! I appreciate it a lot <3 <3 <3
