Wow, really beautiful game! Felt very polished with the sketchbook pages and checkpoints! Took me a while to get the hang of using Abi, and I still don't think I've mastered it, but was definitely a lot of fun to play with!
I think main thing for me is when you "die" to allow the player to get back to the action much quicker. A couple times I accidentally just walked off a rock into the water and had to wait to get back to the action, I want to start playing as fast as possible. Along with that while the controls felt pretty good overall, I almost felt too fast for my own good at times, but once again I got used to it and really enjoyed the whole experience! What a great game for such a short time!