The graphics were very well done and looked polished. The only thing i would complain is the font, that it makes the text harder to read, but i can not pinpoint why. Maybe the lines are too close to each other for such a big font? I really do not know.
I wish there was a bit more of the story, because it cuts off just at the point were we start to know Dust a little bit. But with the time constraints of this jam it is very understandable.
Very nice entry!