I second Deejay's statement. Except there has to be more than just Ross and Ollie, Rainbows have 6 or 7 colors after all! so 5 to 7 main cast including MC???
Don't want o be overburdening you, but colors! There is one other VN at he moment which uses the rainbow as well, but it feels a good deal different from yours. Ross alone is all that needs to make it way different!
