I liked the introduction of Jaye from Chasing Sunsets, it's a great storyline. I hope to see where you go with this, considering she also got her own frustrations about sibling love.
I didn't liked Jaye at all as character since her personality and story and reasoning for treating a good guy like mc, which is rarest in avns like shit for nothing, and even then he only helped that bitch she treated him badly, she is very bad and with millions defect and still treats everyone as secondary level.