I like the concept of the game, however I'm here mostly to report a few bugs.
1. (W, A, S, D) controls do not work properly, they all move the MC forward
2. the enemy character follows the MC and sometimes it ma bug in a way where it can see you threw the wall.
3. while crawling in the vent your character is partially able to clip threw the wall.
4. crouching is ok but a bit slow and weird.
5. Camara feed on the tablet is a bit to bright and in my personal opinion is a bit hard to see what is what.
6. I like that there is a task list but I've gotten confused several time sense the layout of the restaurant is a bit weird.
friendly reminder that I did like the game and as you said yourself you just starting to make this game. I hope that in the future I will see a few more updates to it, I have high hopes that this will be good one.