I can tell a lot of passion went into this - I think you have a good start, and I like how the quests intertwine. My advice to you would be to come up with a way to improve the battle system, it is a little stale as it is right now (basically standard JRPG, attack, attack, attack, heal, attack, attack, etc). One minor bug I encountered was when going back into Conn's house, there was a Conn event image in the house just standing there. Anyways, keep up the good work, I think if you continue putting your passion into this and figure out a way to improve the combat system it could be quite good.