Aside from that I really like what I see so far and characters’ backstories intrigue me to no end.
P. S. I’m sorry I’m not very good at giving praise (/□＼*)・゜
Hi hi! Thank you for the feedback! I do have the feeling that 'awakening' left a lot to be desired since it was a bit long and tedious. It will be fixed to offer more clarity and cohesion in the final game!
'Darkness', the one you mentioned, was meant to be ambiguous because the entire of the story follows the format of someone with missing memories recalling it by pieces. I honestly don't know how to fix this right now, so it'll be worked on as we go haha
The narration, I struggled with this a lot mostly because I didn't know which one to go with at first so it sort of mixed up right now. I'm going to try and make it clearer in next build, like breaking NVL page and paragraphs better. i will probably have to edit some parts into MC's thoughts too, so that it'd be clearer.
The story in the format of: internal monologue, on going story, internal monologue, flashback so it might get confusing. I will try to fix it and make more obvious in the final game, a flashback will also be updated tomorrow so that the preview would be more complete instead of hanging like this.
Again, thank you for the feedback! I'll do my best with the fixes!