Only saw this now. Nice
A few typing errors here and there, but the "meat" of the story itself is great.
By far my favorite character was David. Going to the beach and reading a book, giving good afternoon at 19PM, very cool guy.
This was a good vn, *clap clap*.
Spoilers:
Also the end was a bit depressing, fairytale and real life ending!? Everything was cute and then the name of the endings appear like a punch in your face.