The game is confusing. The way it greeted with a wall of texts is not a really good way to start.
I don't know what is the objective in this game. I don't know what determine the win condition. All I did was move and reset. I've try reading the descriptions and mail message in-game and I still feel like not progressing.
The writing needs improvement. Not the grammar but the format and layout and style. For the in-game message I can understand people would write mail like that but as a game you can make it unrealistic and assist the player by changing the color of some important sentence so the player can understand the main point right away without reading the whole paragraph. Description In the web page is all in one line and its really bad.
But I admire the art in this game. That is the only good thing I find about this game. And its not too bad for the first game. Good job publishing it.