Sorry to say this but Lily does look little masculine for me(I was wondering if she was a ladyboy at first sight..) and the whole story telling(over scattered, over blunted)/dialogue(too many "I wonder"s, "though"s, "giggle"s) are not so good either, I cannot follow the story smoothly and find myself confused from time to time. But Leah(modelling), animations, graphics, economy system and all computer related stuff deserve a huge compliment.
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