Hi! Just chanced upon your page again and saw that I must have forgotten to respond to you! Sorry about that!
Obviously it's been a while since I played now, so I can't recall any specific criticisms. I remember I encountered a bad teleport at some point which softlocked the game, but upon re-loading it didn't happen. Can't remember where abouts that happened though, sorry.
I pretty much liked everything about the game though! Enjoyed the writing, art style is great, music is fantastic. I found all the characters interesting and mostly I was just disappointed when I reached the end of the demo!
How is this project coming along anyway? And what are you plans for it in the future?