Was very confused when the other James appeared. Started again, now as Jack... ...Not again. Hahaha
I don't like when i'm seeing things that the MC its not seeing or being told about. If i'm playing as the MC i want to know the same as him.
I though the Captain would be more aggresive/dominating after the first "event". Doubt (this soon) doesn't look good on her. But i guess i read her character wrong.
I dont really know about how police work is done but i don't think it's like this. But it's easy to accept it for the sake of the story.
Everything else is great, good job.