well thank you for making it i had tons of fun it was awesome. *Cough cough* spoilers? What spoilers? I don't see any *whispers* ok i think we're clear, keep going XD that sounds so cool, but also oh boy does that sounds like ticking time bomb, my boy mc is in for one helluva ride especially if he chose the sinister route this drama sounds juicy! Hehe let's go *cough cough stops whispering* anyways, i more than think ur writing is decent, it's spectacular, no where did i get taken back by the dialogue, it never seemed out of place or artificial, it seemed like what an actual gacha game yandere and a normal admittedly tactless mc would say to each other, hell, the fights even felt like they were already an
old married couples lol, it felt very very realistic, and honestly fresh, i so appreciate an mc who has his own feelings, and that there's gonna be problems and fights, it was super entertaining and refreshing, and it flowed naturally, so i can be invested and stay in the flow, definitely some top notch writing, honestly having a piece of paper to say you qualify as a writer is overrated when you've proved your skills over and over again in each game you make, just write what you want to write and read it over and over to tidy it up, if you think it's something you'd read and enjoy than you're done, you can't please everyone because everyone likes different styles so write it for you and watch as you will get more and more appreciation for it. Have a holly jolly Christmas and have a happy new year!