Is that a misnomer on purpose??? "Comfort Room" I thought it was a bloody lounge! *noped backwards in time out of there*
BUT YOU ARE A DOG! XD and he keeps proving it >.>
REALLY need to know what Van looks like for this day 3! XD, could also make some one off CGs of him being "Leashed" XD
The foreshadowing... but also how natural it stands two be regardless! Wow!
On the subject of the horror part I mentioned a while ago, all there is to say is that if there are routes, the initial horror should be the same/similar (consistency), but how the characters react to it may differ (logical). This keeps it from deviating horribly when the initial impact happens, and makes sure to follow smooth flow of the character's personality. This is also VERY important if in all the cases what happens as intro to the VN will always transpire (what happens after is not known, important to keep that cliffhanger!), else you would end up with highly different endings that may up having some to a lot of inconsistences betwixt the routes.
When I said ECHO did the horror wrong, this is what I mean, every route has a totally different start and endpoint, its like they aren't from the same VN. This mess up also doesn't happen until after route selection, the horror isn't present or established yet even. This only further leads to the many mess ups.
You have already made the horror known, as backstory for now. Its established and they (two of them) are aware of it having existed, it isn't some random surprise out of the blue.
Now... I'm assuming Husky then Fox now for next wo days.