I really appreciate your feedback! Progress is slow, but is continuing. Next update I'll be sure to stop the game before we get to chapters with unfinished assets.
OH SHIT A REPLY, was not expecting one actually. And stopping the game seems a bit. meh, for people who only care about the story and can continue without visuals. maybe it would be best to plane an in-game screen, saying "Visuals comming soon. Not avalible past this point." So that people can read onwards if the choose so. The MS Paint made it seem like she was in a dream and threw me off guard the further I read through. Also, Great to know that this is still being worked on!