Hi ArctosGames & first I'd share my thoughts referring to game's theme, same as screenshots than downloading graphical parts (same as using older devices-issue), still sounds like me as first reviewer here after 37 days yet?
The faces in-games for textlines could vary, e.g. look less "stunned" in expressions? I'd think of emotions like: angry (in reference of that fox), or "excited/worried" (referring to "chose your faith") like if the protagonist could save the good ones, solving quests without failing, etc.
First two faces next to textlines in screenshots: looking bit mirrored in image, with similar shape of recoloured shirt/outfit, still hair being bit static (first person like split in half, mirrored to get its haircut?), bottom's screenshot: eyes in synchronized pose ...stunned look would let me generally think of tilted head or worried-look could vary in lip's appearance (biting), hands could be visible like "facepalm" if player/NPC being tricked?
pre-last screenshot: floor's tiles look bit copypasted in each squares that's places? The wall looks rather fancy: gaps in-between those images and mirrored balloons, uhm how about e.g. loosen stripes of wall to get it more unique too? I adore the seats there, (second&third walls/floors look nice in aesthetic), the font for spoken text looks more hallowwen-themed, maybe more roundy or handwritten-type could fit better?
I think bit of shadows could get your shaped look more 3D-ish? last screenshot possibly could use a lamp than another drawer on identical pose next to that bed? Maybe an added wardrobe or blankets/cushion looking more "worn out" than like woken-up next to bed in perfect shape?
Just some suggestions about aesthetic because of facial/graphics, maybe they sound inspiring somehow? I guess the third screenshot offering shadows for its walls, which look way realistic & nice, same as different font in text.