This was quite interesting, and it's clear you've put a lot of work into this! The narrative is fairly rich for a game jam submission, so it came out of left-field like I'd opened a fantasy novel.
I wasn't sure at first if it was linear or not, and was glad to find a third of the way in that there were options. I'd just add a refresh button at the end - or perhaps a "The End" - to make it clear the story has finished. There are also just a few spelling mistakes (mostly where words need a space between them).
Other than those small things, great job!