So coooool! Reading it wakes so many emotions... like... I dunno... emotions that are never hard, but always passionated. I agree it may sound weird, but I don't know how to say it ^^'
All characters are cool, and first of them the narrator! That's great! It'd been cool seing all characters (uncle, teachers, etc) but since your VN is in development, I suppose it'll come later.
The only thing I regret is not being able to make one or two choices earlier. I thought at first that this was a kinetic novel. Ok, this is just a detail. I really appreciated reading!
I'll really look forward to further developments! Thank you for creating this!