Lovely job so far!
I...sort of miss the chance of having some "intimate" time with the chars - they're all present on screen most of the time!
And, I was trying to please everyone, but ended the game with 5 stars on everyone - only to discover the game is unfinished :(
I read "version 2.3" and assumed it was finished.
Maybe add some info on the main page of the game with the overall completion of each route - that would help people figure out if they're doing something wrong or not ^^
(PS: that "you died, lol" end feels a bit out of place ^^")
Sorry for the criticism - I love the game so far! ^^
I can't deny I miss some lewd scenes (I mean, all characters feel like well willing to get into your pants and most show some sexual interest).
Yet, I really can't imagine anyone getting into hardcore scenes - unless they are really discreet about it :P
I love the art! The music sometimes feels a bit excessive/loud.
The "duality" of the story makes it weirdly creepy and scary sometimes - please don't make it too dark (I'm still traumatised by some vn out there :P ).
Most of the story seems to be quite "on rails" with barely any ramification, but I understand you're not working on it full time, and it's far for completion :)
That's really promising! I really believe you should have a Patreon for this, to speed up the development a bit and keep you motivated :)
Keep up with the great job! ^^