ฅ/ᐠ｡ᆽ｡ᐟ \ Hello~
This was a pretty fun read. I liked the vibrant color palette of the artwork and the story, although a bit easy to predict, was entertaining. I'm assuming some inspiration came from Charon, and if that is indeed the case then this is pretty spot on in terms of style and formula. If you ever make more games like this, I'd definitely give it a try as this was a ton of fun.
With that said, I also have some suggestions. While playing, there were sometimes long pauses between dialogue. I edited out those pauses in the video so I can't pinpoint where each pause was, but I think it's best to remove them or just shorten it altogether. The grammar and spelling were a bit off sometimes, but it wasn't anything too bad. Lastly, this type of game would benefit from a skip dialogue or fast forward dialogue option since there's no saving.
Since this is still in its developmental state, I'm looking forward to the finished product.