Really impressive production values, you can tell a lot of love went into this. As you expand the game, I hope you pay a lot of attention to the writing as well. It felt awkward a number of times in the demo, and it would be a shame if that kept the game from reaching its full potential.
Hey Ian! Sorry for the late reply.
All the dialog from the demo were placeholders, none of it will be in the full game. We have a professional writer doing the scripts for the game Hopefully, we we release the full version, you'll like the script :)