This was fun! Your sprites worked okay, but, if you continue working on this, it might be fun to work with an artist. Also, for some reason I went into this under the impression that it was a story about gay guys so I gave my character a guy name. I don't think I realized I was a girl until Dash started calling me kitten, which was... a little uncomfy, but I guess that is the point of Dash.
As a queer person, I tried to flirt with the person who seemed the least straight, which was my gorgeous glowing orb, Hubert. Hubie, I affectionately dubbed him. ^_^ I ended up liking Dash too, it was fun to see his shocked face whenever I told him he was an ok dude, and a future flying around space with him seemed like more fun than being stuck on Earth with either Hubie or Eric.