haha, awww. you're ok. no worries about rambling. i appreciate it. So yeah, a lot of the purpose in those conflict scenes is that most relationships go through some hard shit. I wanted these guys to go through joint conflict again, something they each were responsible for but actually show how people who care about each other can talk things out and resolve them. I think a lot of people just freak out in relationships and cut shit off quickly. I wanted to show how something that was potentially relationship-ending could be resolved in a realistic way.
But thanks for making an account and chiming in. This update was really hard for me to write and I'm glad it paid off with soooo many people