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This demo has such a cute concept & setup! I'm pretty intrigued by the roses & the dance of the roses. I'm so excited to see how the overall story will progress, as well as all of the different routes! Nora was well written as well, I'm already attached! Also, I really liked how Nora showed Akane the music on her phone. It was such a nice detail to include. The only thing that I think could be improved upon is some of the wording. I played the English version & there were a few grammatical errors. If I'm not mistaken, the original was written is Spanish, making the English version a translation. Please know that I could understand everything & overall it was a good translation. But I think that the game would benefit from another proof read. Great job overall! I can't wait to play the full game! The plot & characters are so solid already. Keep up the good work!