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I been reading and loving the V.N. that was until the flow of the reading was broken by one huge ERROR that that stopped me dead in my tracks !!! at the start on the story its stated that LIV had *( CANCER and wouldn't see her 18th birthday !!! )* but half way through the story when you meet "" NISHA "" in the pool she clearly say o your the girl with *( LEUKAEMIA )*

and that stopped me dead in my tacks and my mind was going woh wwoohh wwwooohhh wait a minute what the hell, so i saved it and went back to the start and sure enough when LIV got out of hospital and is talking to CELESTA in the car LIV says and i quote !!!

*"( Nice thing to say to a CANCER patient)"*

please could you re-edit it so its ether cancer or leukaemia all the way through the story PLEASE !!!

BCG3 years ago(+7)

leukemia is blood cancer.

mr_gatez3 years ago

OK that's fair enough but that should have been stated from the start so as none medical mined people reading would be thinking like i did what the hell " error " and then delete and unfollow at the drop of a hat witch would mean lost readers and even lost people that would want to pay for it !!!

Hawkeye3 years ago(+1)

HA,HA, now come on! You can not wiggle out of this with a comment like, "so as none medical mined people reading would be thinking.....", NO. Any medical minded people playing, should already know that Leukemia is a blood cancer. So, you should laugh this off and learn a new thing. At least your comment is not as stupid as the one claiming the developer hates men,lol. Have a great day.

mr_gatez3 years ago(+1)(-1)

THANK YOU !!! that's makes me feel so much better that's it's not just me and I think that proves my point about that things like that need to be consistent throughout the whole of the story

medatgal3 years ago(+2)

You must get annoyed after all the work and then get that stupid crap...lol. I hope to see more innocent seduction and corruption of young and old. I'm all in and hope you get a ton of support to develop this great story.

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