Thanks for the feedback! I know I need to get into a workflow that makes it easier to check for spelling and grammar, it's so hard for me to go through the entire thing.
Honestly, I have 0 clue on dissections, I remember my teacher doing one once as a demonstration and I can't even remember what was dissected, mouse or rat or cow heart, it's weird. But I'm glad to hear I was able to make that impression, and it helped the atmosphere of the game.