Gotta say, i quite like this game. I honestly wasn't expecting too much when i went and downloaded this game. But i must say, i enjoyed it quite a bit. The characters are well fleshed out and at least partially memorable. Part of me was expecting this to be another NSFW game with poor grammar and spelling mistakes, but no, the story flows well for the most part and works well with the premise.
I didn't expect there to be animations in this game, especially not the fluid animations seen in the dance sequences. Did you guys use motion capture on some scene? Because that's what it looked like to me.
The only real downsides i can think of in the game is the way the gallery works, the sound effect, the grind-iness of some sections and the cum effects:
I know next to nothing about programming, but i do play a decent amount of Ren'py nsfw visual novels. My problem with the gallery is 1. it can't be directly accessed from the main menu or the pause menu and 2. scenes don't carry over from save to save. When i realised that i had missed out on Candy's scene after having unlocked everything else, i loaded up a previous save and played through it again. When i loaded up my mostly completed save, i saw that it was still missing from my gallery and had to use the developers room and unlock all scenes using that. I highly suggest y'all find a way to implement the gallery into the main menu and pause menu for ease of access as well as to allow scenes unlocked in one save carry across all saves, this is more those that like to replay scenes that they've unlocked.
The sound effects honestly don't match some of the characters, and i'm chalking this up to you guys using stock sex sound effects.
The grind in getting money for the magazine and Candy was quite labourious, though getting discipline and grades up at below 20 was difficult, it at least got easier when you get past the 30-35 threshold.
This one is more a personal issue/fetish i have, so feel free to ignore this section, the cum effects/bukkakes on characters are kind of lacking for me. I personally prefer the semen to be more 'creamy' and 'thick' in my porn, but the semen in this game is sort of 'watery' and 'thin'. Sometimes you can't even tell if the headmaster is cumming, due to how transparent the semen is, especially during the latest scene with Rachel. But, like i said, this is just a personal fetish of mine, so no need to put too much serious consideration into it.
Overall, i'd give the game a 4/5. Can't wait to see what you guys add in, in future versions.