*Comment contains some spoilers. So if you haven't played the game, play it before reading.*
WOW. This writing is excellent. Top-notch job here. I think the narrator's father died? I'm not too sure. The air of mystery is wonderfully created and sustained. This is wonderful work. The only thing is: the final word can't be seen at all. I get that each word was darker and darker, but the last one seems to be completely black. I don't know if that was on purpose. It didn't take away from my experience, though. Great work!
(I'm also in this Twiny Jam, btw. My game is HCF.)