Hey Ing! Played your demo for OS&S over the weekend, and Gryph was right in that it was very short...but sweet.
I also didn't want it to end (so quickly). Hugo kinda reminds me of the oblivious MC, whose inner musings don't match their actions or what the reader already has gleaned of their wants/desires. For example, we read Hugo express internally that he is shocked that his date is a "Mr." and not a "Ms.", but he stays (he says) to be polite and he's intrigued. When really we all know he's attracted.
The difference being, Hugo is farrr more likable than those typical oblivious MC's! <3 So we give him a pass on his inner dialogue, since he's written so genuinely and does sincerely not seem to understand his own musings (even if we the audience do).
Oh and not to be left last (on purpose), but the visuals are <3 <3 <3. So consistent. So refined and thought out. Wonderful.