oww <3 this got very intense in a way i really didn't expect. i agree with a lot of snek's comment but also wanted to mention that the backgrounds were cool, i like how they got more smudged as the scenes progressed. plus having kira and lydia's narrations on opposite sides was really effective. you've done a lot with just a few tools
and wow, yeah, mona seems like she really has it together emotionally at the end there. hope some of that gets over to lydia somehow, in spite of the distance <3