Pretty funny story. A couple of jokes felt like they'd been done before, and the dialogue at the end was a bit long, but generally the comedy worked well, and I don't feel I wasted my time playing it. Both characters have distinct personalities. I like the ripple effect, and the graphics are nice and clear.
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you're fine! if i actually had time/energy/planned to make it a game from the start, it would have been different and i'd have broken the text up more and stuff-- i almost had plans for that until well.. lack of energy + needing more brainstorming how to actually break and maybe rewrite the dialogue etc etc
nah don't put yourself down! my very first bitsy game was.. very much not like my games are now xD (not saying you should play it but you can see how i just made a thing with no actual planning or design https://le-onionboi.itch.io/lil-onion-detective a bitsy game just needs intention whatever that might be- art? the words? the idea? i've played a lot of bitsy games and while some aspect might not be "amazing" theres always something good in them! the only bad bitsy game is the game not even attempted to be made :P
sorry to preach i guess.. just.. yeah,,,,,,