Pros:
- Solid game idea: I absolutely love the concept you described on paper, and if it gets updated ill likely will come back and try it out again.
- Amazing documentation: The amount of description you added and the quality of it is super useful for an incomplete game, as i would have not left anywhere near of a good review if you didnt.
Cons:
- Very incomplete: I can see what you are trying to do, and some things are implimented, but it is near impossible to actually play as the controls are just not done yet.