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Thanks, I'll check that one out.

You're welcome! Great job on the game. I took notes on a few other lines in the dialogue don't make complete sense, e.g. "I'll borrow you my old grimoire" would make more sense if it said "I'll loan you my" or "I'll let you borrow my".

The game is so well-done otherwise, so when I noticed these things it caught me off guard. Let me know if you'd like me to report any other things of this nature? Hope it helps. Keep up the good work!

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We have a "corrections" section in our Discord server, and you can always report any of of those as a bug under the "dialogue" category.
We are always happy to be able to improve the game quality.

Will do! Aloha 🙂