Nice work, this story has a lot of twists and turns! There are a number of interesting dilemmas and a clear goal that drives the player. There are some code and formatting issues that should be relatively easy to fix and make the project look much cleaner.
There is an image that is too large on the page with the text: "You're on the road and have to stop for a an elderly woman."
You could resize the image in an image editing program, or you can use a width of height attribute in the img tag in the passage to fix that, ie <img height="400" src="...">
It looks like there is a syntax error in the passage that starts "Let the ducks pass by as you wait for them to cross by safely"
I'm guessing there is a missing ( at the beginning of the line of code. I think that is causing some of the other errors as well, because it means that the variable is not being set properly.