The dialogues, well actually the texts in general, were pretty unique and made this game a really fresh experience. I think it'll be cool to show at the begining a little bit of their friendship, to motivate the player to look for his friend. Or maybe to have some flashbacks with those cool dialogues like "Twig loved this" and so, so we can connect more with the story.
In general it was a really cool experience, thanks :)
PS: I pressed like all the buttons on the keyboard at the first scene to find out how to Jump lol.